First chapter rewrite

After some helpful comments from my friends of the quill, I’ve redone the first chapter of Tribal Wars. Hopefully, it makes more sense now. It can be found here. Now I can finally start with chapter 2…

Oh, and a Happy New Year to everyone.

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